We were so close yet so far..

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Teen Poetry #8

We were so close yet so far..

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-04-14 07:15 PM

So close to you..
Floating above it all, flying in the sky
So close yet so far..
With you I'll defy

the laws of gravity and all its rules
I feel so close to you, dancing here tonight
We're so different and yet the same
As different as dark and light

But with out each other there would be nothing

Slow dancing away from it all
Like drifting in the tides
Sparkling lights illuminate your beauty
You just glance back and with a smile wide

I just don't want to let go of this perfect moment

I feel so alive.
Life will go by
I don't want to be here without
I want you to be by my side

The music will soon stop
And we'll take our separate parts
I just want to hold you
I knew this feeling from the start

It's the feeling of love

I knew this wasn't in my mind
You can feel this too
Slowly i reach for your hand
Lean in forward gazeing into your eyes made of blue

Closer we get together..

The music comes to its finish
The final hanging note
End this fairytale ending
this is all he wrote...

I step back
Couples are starting to part
But we were just so close
I can feel it in my heart

We're so close yet so far...

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For those who don't know. Today is the aniversery of the titanic sinking. Hope you enjoy my poem!!

~Zach~

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-14 07:25 PM

good job i did enjoy this!!

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-04-14 10:15 PM

I LOVE THIS POEM! i don't know why..but i do! L.I.B.R.A.R.Y!!!!!!!!
{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-04-14 11:42 PM

Soo many applications!! So many meanings!!!
Need I say more?

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

imsimplyme
Junior Member

since 2008-04-01

Posts 16
California

4 posted 2008-04-15 10:34 PM

wow, thats was really awesome.
it had so much emotion in it, it was like out of the movie or something

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