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Teen Poetry #8

Time

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-04-13 12:02 PM

time
keeps ticking by

time
does not lie

time
takes you by suprise

time
you have to keep in mind

time
is going away

what would happen
if today
was your last day...

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

1 posted 2008-04-13 02:16 PM

This is really good short but good.

*-crazycece-*

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

2 posted 2008-04-13 02:33 PM

I love this JJ. I really do, it made me think about some stuff I sort of take for granted. Thanx for writing hun.

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

3 posted 2008-04-13 05:02 PM

oh wow... makes you think! oh gosh i just realized how true that is... my b-days tomarrow and i still cant believe im going to be 16. dosent seem possible...

great message. great poem.

xoxo,
Jaki H

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2008-04-13 05:45 PM

ahh if tomorrow was my last day.. now are we talking before or after math class haha JK.. great poem, held many insights

Krysti

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-04-19 01:26 PM

thank you guys

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