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ok, i admit im a bit crazy, but.....
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
yah, um i was kinda bored and tired of writing serious poetry. Last non-serious one i wrote was about a pomegranate and i think this one is even weirder but oh well... hope you like! ____________________________________________ My Manson His birthday- Jan. fifth a Satanist- just a myth and I cannot really help it I'm in love Four-fifty scars on his chest Folgers coffee he detests and though rough around the edges he's he one I still dream of He loves his broccoli Wonka is his fav. movie opinionated and smart and his past rips out his heart Canton, Ohio he was born first acting job was in a porn Zodiac is Capricorn all his life was viewed with scorn Favorite numbers 13,6,4 he loves violence, blood and gore and he's known to leave his fans in an uproar Doesn't matter that he's weird and perhaps a little feared I still think that he's a saint though his song says that he sAINT And I love him oh so dear for his message he's made clear with M. Manson I agree "I never said to be like me..." "...I say to be like you and make a difference" |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
...i dont' get it... the last line confused me. It's a cute poem though. Good job! {~~*~~} {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
oh, its a mm quote. hes pretty much saying dont try to be different and outspoken by trying to be like marilyn manson. hes saying be yourself and fight for your beliefs, not his. aka dont just blindly follow him unless you acutally agree. be yourself, blah blah blah... yah, i knew this poems a bit weird so thats ok. thanks for the honesty. just felt like writing something weird. as i said before, this is the girl who writes about pomegranates. nuf said. =) |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
oh, okay. And it's not that weird of a poem. i've seen ones that are very random. {~~*~~} {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] |
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LittleLotte New Member
since 2008-04-04
Posts 6 |
i actually have a friend who wrote an entire poem about cheese and all of its particular attributes (to add to the topic of random poetry..)- it was pretty amusing, acutally, just as this one was :-) "It seems to me that I am trying to tell you a dream - making a vain attempt, because no relation of a dream can convey the dream-sensation, that comi |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Rofl I love crazy people!! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Great poem.. i found it sort of funny lol. Also crazy people are great to be with!!.. so what if they think crazy thoughts? it just makes them more interesting to be with! lol. ~Zach~ |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
YAY! congradulations! its my b-day tomarrow and youve just made up for the fact that none of my friends remembered- again! and i have been inspired to write another stupid poem! you see, the trick is to find meaning in an ordinary object or person and make it sound good so everyone forgets the stupid topic. thanks one and all! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Happy Birthday for 2morrow Jaki, & hey I write stuff like this sometmes too, it can be a lot of fun...good job. BTW, you hear about the dyslexic devil worshipper? Sold his soul to Santa.....  John |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
hHAHHAHAHA!!!! effjayel thats hilarious!!!! wait, wait. stupid one... whats the only kind of cheese you cant have?...... NAT-CHO cheese!!! yuk yuk that was cheesey...=0 and id just like to say im currently working on a poem called "Pina Colada in a Chinese Restaurant"!!! [This message has been edited by Jaki H (04-13-2008 08:48 PM).] |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
Nice poem lol enjoyed JJ |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
"Pina Colada in a Chinese Restaurant"!! HAhahahaha that sounds hallarious!! i can't wait to see it!! also i might be late on this but Happy Birthday Jaki!! and great poem!!! ~Zach~ |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
thanx!   |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
So this was a pretty awsome poem I must say, I found some parts a bit strange to read (like the flow) but it was still good |
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schizandrax New Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 4 |
Ya know what...i've never met anyone who is so into Marilyn Manson and this poem rocks! I think it's funny and weird but it's so funny that i don't think it's weird anymore...Hurmm lol if that makes any sense..  |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
haha!!! yes, marilyn manson is my love!!!!!! oh brian hugh warner, age 39... i love you!!!! wherever you are!!!!!   |
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