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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
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0 posted 2008-04-11 06:57 PM


im eroding like the sandstone
and washing into the tide
im slowly falling apart
and holding on for the ride

and in my mind i wonder
is it time to let go
free fall from the top floor
and forget about the ropes

but those ropes might catch me
they might just be my noose
strangling the air i breath
as if its sucked right from the room

it sucks when your by yourself
and aching for a friend
not just a person
who will betray you in the end

my worlds fragile glass
like a porcelain mask
thats just begging to be broken
but im a little too weak
to be trying to scream
so instead im praying and hoping

for a easy way out
and a pocket full of cash
and a new mercades benz
with a girl to match

but thats a fantasy
encased in ecstacy
sweet like sugar
but sour for your teeth

now smile bright
and dont worry tonight
dream sweet dreams
and turn out the lights

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2008-04-13 05:28 PM


WOW!!! I love this CO
Krysti

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since 2008-01-20
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inside the shadows
2 posted 2008-04-13 05:36 PM


Wandering Thoughts Of A Fragile Heart?

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

x-tears-x
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since 2008-04-13
Posts 43
England
3 posted 2008-04-13 05:42 PM


Lovely lovely lovely. I hope things will look up.
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