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Teen Poetry #8

Blinded by your life

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-04-09 10:24 PM

I'm right here, can't you
see me screaming? Crying
for who pushes me out of
the way. Hot stinging tears,
washing away my mask. Wont
you look down from your
life and rescue me from where
I lay. Reach out and grab
my hands, don't whatch me
fall, don't let your actions
destroy me.

Darkness is coming through
my curtin of glass, choking
me in what i used to see. All
they have to do is open their
eyes to see me at the feet
of life, dark as it is, I can't
be rescued.

Reach out and grab my hands,
don't let me fall, don't let
your thoughts destroy me. Look
down at the people of the dark
and see a world that needs to
be rescued. Look down and see
the life we live.
Don't leave me again, don't
run away. I'm not a ghost, I
just need to be rescued.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-09 11:32 PM

good write!

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-04-10 12:48 PM

I love it

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2008-04-10 10:59 AM

Love it em.. writers blocks now over..

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

4 posted 2008-04-10 11:16 AM

i love this its really good thats a lib

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-04-11 06:52 PM

Thanks for reading..

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

6 posted 2008-04-11 07:04 PM

thank you for writting

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