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The Spark has Gone (Im Sorry)
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The Spark has Gone (Im Sorry) |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
Goodbye Im gonna let you go now I don't feel a spark between the two of us anymore Baby I still want you... But I don't think you want me still I had my chances I had my moments we had are moments...... I've needed you since freshmen year But it looks like you wanna let the flame out So I'll do it for you I'll sit here tonight and drop a tear over the flame I'm Sorry... I really am I wanna tell you everything But Im afraid you cant handle everything I have to tell you Baby I still want you... But I don't think you want me still Your smiles always been gorgeous I'll be fine though... I wont ever find another like you Because I truly believe you were the one It seems just like yesterday I saw you smiling at me every day Im Sorry... I have a tear drop in my eye now Im Sorry... I don't no who your new lover is But I hope he makes you happy Im Sorry... All I did was make things hard for you I need you baby... But Im gonna let you go I need to move on I'll find another girl But I'll always think about you |
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ShawtySheFly Member
since 2007-12-19
Posts 71In his Elevator (LOL) |
Awwww i wanna cry ={ that was so sad.....i'm sorry like really....good write even though its heartbreaking I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
this is so sad a very good write i can feel everything that you have written...lib... JJ |
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masksrlife Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109Canada |
wow this is so much the same as what just happend to me.... sad. good right. |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
thanks guys |
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Virtual Abyss Member
since 2008-04-09
Posts 52East Coast - USA |
Krad, I wonder if this was as therapeutic as it sounds or if that was even the goal. I'm sure it was tough! Great capture of your feelings. Keep on truckin! V/r, Virtual Abyss |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohh I love this it was sooo sweet and sad and everything!! Krysti |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
well I guess its over now....... I've lost her...... |
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Tripp'ncutie Member
since 2008-05-05
Posts 73minnasota |
omg that was soooooo sad. wow and it realates to a situation i am in right this very moment. wow its nice to see that there are guys out there with hearts.lol any way awsome writing skills. i loved it! |
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imsimplyme Junior Member
since 2008-04-01
Posts 16California |
dang, i know where your coming from. this is really deep, i could feel the saddness in every word. great poem |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
this is by far one of my deeper writings, but its the truth |
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Loruh New Member
since 2008-05-05
Posts 5 |
Aw that's sad. It's great though. |
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krad008 Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 82 |
wow my favorite poem |
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