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rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

0 posted 2008-04-06 03:38 AM

most of the time i write to let things out, this time nothing came our but tears so i know its not good but you can critque n e way.

this pain is ripped through me
tearing more of my heart
i knew i was gunna get hurt
i know it from the start

why?

why did this happen?
why did you start to imply
of something that id hoped would be
just for it to be a lie

when?

when will all these lies stop?
will it ever end?
by now im more than used to it
and i know ill never win

how?

how can you say you love me
when right now your talking to him?
how can you say you want me
when we cant even be friends?

i see

i see who your priorities are with
i see who you put above me
im so hurt by you right now
that i cant even think or speak

leave

leave me alone
leave me to die
its not like i matter to anyone...but
good bye.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

1 posted 2008-04-06 03:21 PM

hopefully the lies stops now
well cool poem thing

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2008-04-06 03:27 PM

hopefully..doubtful
thanx.
btw it wasnt about u if thats wut u think

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

3 posted 2008-04-06 03:32 PM

thats kewl well still hopefully the lies stop

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

4 posted 2008-04-06 03:35 PM

yea..thanx tho

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

5 posted 2008-04-06 03:43 PM

yep

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

6 posted 2008-04-07 12:53 PM

nice write

JJ

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

7 posted 2008-04-07 12:54 PM

hey thanx!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

8 posted 2008-04-08 11:20 AM

That was deep i loved it lots good write

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