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Teen Poetry #8
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hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
0 posted 2008-04-04 01:44 PM


this is really short and weird. wrote this in like 2 min. sorry if you dont like it. and i dont know if i like the title, any better ones?

with love
comes pain
with tears
comes heartaches
with dreams
comes rality

with life
comes choices
with choices
comes mistakes
with mistakes
comes regret

regret will never leave you
unless
you exspet the change


JJ

[This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (04-04-2008 06:16 PM).]
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masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada
1 posted 2008-04-04 02:59 PM

This poem is really good even if its not long.

*-crazycece-*
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-04-05 12:12 PM

thanx

JJ
justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 321
3 posted 2008-04-06 03:02 AM

o dang that was good
hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
4 posted 2008-04-12 05:00 PM

thank you

JJ
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