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Teen Poetry #8

Just an illusion

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

0 posted 2008-04-02 11:34 AM

I'm a damsel in distress
such a beautiful disaster
a raging tiger hiding
from absolutley nothing
I'm a fearless fire lighting up the earth
destroying the land
such a rampage of hurricanes
A crazy girl searching. . .
for love but thats all
I'm that screaming wind
such a power to blow you away
yet i'm absolutley nothing
in your eyes nor mine
this is just an illusion

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-02 08:34 PM

NiCe. enjoyed

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-04-02 11:45 PM

Good Write!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

3 posted 2008-04-03 06:42 PM

That was a really good poem. I'v felt this powerfull emotion as will and i to know that it was an illusion. But i really enjoyed it.

*-crazycece-*

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

4 posted 2008-04-04 03:49 PM

Thanks for the comments

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

5 posted 2008-09-24 03:03 PM

wow.

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