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23heavens
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since 2008-04-02
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0 posted 2008-04-02 11:03 AM



When Im down
And theres no reason why,
I just take a look
Up in the sky.

And there I see
The stars above,
Each one Shining
Full of care and Love...

Each one resembles
A Friend of Mine,
The closer they are
The brighter they Shine.

Of the many stars
Some far some near,
Your the one  
I hold most dear...

And Always know
Im up there too..
Shining in the Darkness,
Always there for you...

So whenever you are down
And you dont why,
Just take a good look
Up in the sky.........

"Someones thinking of You"

© Copyright 2008 daryl emmanuel - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2008-04-02 12:06 PM


I like this first post from you...
Welcome to Passions!

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" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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KRJ

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

2 posted 2008-04-02 01:28 PM


AWW!! This was so nice..great job, and welcome to pip!
hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
3 posted 2008-04-02 08:32 PM


this is sweet... great job! hopeing to read more...

JJ

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
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4 posted 2008-04-03 01:07 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! and this was amazingly awsome!!!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

23heavens
New Member
since 2008-04-02
Posts 8
India
5 posted 2008-04-03 12:05 PM


HEy Thanx Everyone....Your apreciation means a lottt....!!!

"Someones thinking of You"

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