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Teen Poetry #8

who I am

rockangel_gv
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 43

0 posted 2008-04-02 10:05 AM

I am living my life because the life is one,
I don`t know what tomorrow will come.
I love my family, I love my friends,
my love to them will never ends.
I am not senseless, I am not bad,
I`ve never meant to make them sad.
I am not perfect, sometimes I don`t see
that all they do they do it for me.
I made mistakes, sometimes I am wrong,
but it can`t turn right this simple song.
Whwn the day ends end comes the night,
I look in the stars up in the sky…
…wishing ti be an angel,
to make dreams come true,
but I`m just a girl, what can I do?
I love the rithm, live my life,
like to be smiled, hate to cry…
Maybe I close my eyes to things I don`t
want to see, but I can`t close my heart
to The feels I don`t want to feel.
I used to be smiled when I wanted to cry,
`cause after the storm sun will shine.
Maybe it`s not easy, it`s not OK,
but it was me…I choose that way.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-02 08:41 PM

good write.

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

2 posted 2008-04-03 12:28 PM

wow that was great

rockangel_gv
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 43

3 posted 2008-04-03 01:13 AM

thanks

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

4 posted 2008-04-03 01:24 AM

really nice. good job

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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