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Teen Poetry #8

Voice Please

jwack741
New Member

since 2008-03-31

Posts 7

0 posted 2008-03-31 10:24 PM

sometimes my feelings are so unstable,
you got me weak sometimes unable,
to think of anything other than you,
but other times,
it's like baby you don't care,
makes me twisted inside i must say,
but when i hear your voice, i know im okay,
so your voice baby is all im asking for,
let me hear it, just one time,
let me hear you say you love me too

rockangel_gv
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 43

1 posted 2008-04-01 10:27 AM

This is great, I love it!

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

2 posted 2008-04-01 11:10 AM

Good poem it's so right how sometime we just need to hear that one voice to smile

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

3 posted 2008-04-01 07:34 PM

great poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

4 posted 2008-04-01 09:59 PM

nice job here!

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