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jwack741
New Member

since 2008-03-31

Posts 7

0 posted 2008-03-31 10:19 PM

please
dont act like you care
please
dont just stand there
thanks
thanks for giving me something to sing
thanks
for inspirations while misleading me
dead
as i was as soon as ur lips reached me
hope
its wat is burning, for eternity
chance
is the last thing that your giving to me
love
is wat is starved, that im trying to feed
thanks
thanks for knowing what you've given to me
please
close the door next time your leaving...

c/c (compliment/criticize)

made it in like 5 mins

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-04-02 10:25 AM

Welcome to PIP!!!!!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

2 posted 2008-04-02 11:21 AM

Welcome to the crazy world of PIP!!! You'll learn alot here through other poems and critique of your own cause i have.....anyway i guess that's a pretty good first

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2008-04-02 12:08 PM

Welcome to PiP! Did you know that there
is a feature in your Profile section where
you can request people to critique your poems? Please look under the Member's Area/Help section and you'll see where you can personalize your profile for future critiques.

Also, please check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

4 posted 2008-04-02 01:27 PM

welcome to pip! nice write

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-04-02 08:46 PM

welcome welcome to PIP! hopeing to read more nice write

JJ

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

6 posted 2008-04-03 12:59 PM

omg i love it!!! new fav author!!!! welcome to passions!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

7 posted 2008-04-03 01:20 AM

it's pretty good for 5mins. welcome to pip

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

jwack741
New Member

since 2008-03-31

Posts 7

8 posted 2008-04-03 02:58 AM

thanks alot guys

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

9 posted 2008-04-04 03:19 AM

Welcome To Passions Great first post

hope to read more soon
Krysti

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