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ily06.12.07
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since 2007-11-24
Posts 15


0 posted 2008-03-31 11:59 AM



-- This is for my baby brother he just turned 12 and my mother walked back into his life, not even knowing how old he is. --

She put me through hell
and even know you saw all she did to me
you still want to see your Mother.
I can't stop you,
I can't deny your wish,
I guess you have to figure it out yourself.
You'll become the pray in her mind,
unleash her beastly side.
Soon you'll see all the presents mean nothing
and all the words from her mouth are lies,
she'll let you down,
turn your thoughts around,
and make you wish you would die.
She'll show you her true colors.

Yea shes your mother,
you came from her,
she brought you to this world,
but you'll soon realize her mind games,
her mission that involves you,
her wish for you,
because I was there before.

She'll try to be herself but the disease takes over,
She'll leave you with tears in your eyes,
words you'll never forget,
a whole in your heart,
you'll become broken then you'll see why I left her in the past.
She'll always hold a piece to my heart from when she was sane,
but that and her memories will be all she has left of me.  

© Copyright 2008 ily06.12.07 - All Rights Reserved
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
1 posted 2008-03-31 01:23 PM


everything you wrote makes me see how  you feel, good job!!

JJ

wisdomofthesword
Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224
the last place on earth
2 posted 2008-03-31 06:03 PM


hey really nice write

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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