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Amic
Junior Member

since 2008-02-17

Posts 39
...I think Im lost again...

0 posted 2008-03-31 10:46 AM

Wanting perfection
They look at you
It tears your heart apart
To hear how
You screwed up
Again.
Unable to please,
It’s killing you.

Seeking excellence
They come to you
Not asking
But telling
Of the list you
Must complete
Just to earn
Another

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-03-31 01:12 PM

Great write i feel everything you have written ... library...

JJ

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-04-07 12:51 PM

i cant see why people havent replyed to this

JJ

Amic
Junior Member

since 2008-02-17

Posts 39
...I think Im lost again...

3 posted 2008-04-07 12:20 PM

Thanks for replying Hidden

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-04-07 03:15 PM

Well phrased! This is how I used to feel. Library definatly!
Heres my advice. Be yourself. If it doesn't please somone WHO CARES? Sure you can take advice or do favors for people you respect or whatever, but that can't become the primary focus of your life.
First you'll gaurd your emotions, then you'll become vague and You'll start lieing about what you've done and havn't done. Trust me I've been there and it's not fun.
Great Poem

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

Amic
Junior Member

since 2008-02-17

Posts 39
...I think Im lost again...

5 posted 2008-04-07 06:34 PM

Thanks Earl, Ive actually come to find that that is true. And I am now trying to reverse this... being vague and lieing .. its not who I am. But it is who I have become so now I have to turn this around!

Thanks again for replying guys!

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

6 posted 2008-04-08 08:33 PM

No problem, but i was just really shocked no one had written because it is such a good poem.

JJ

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

7 posted 2008-04-11 12:46 PM

wow I loved this Brittany

Krysti

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

8 posted 2008-04-12 09:36 PM

oh my G-d who are you and why have you been stalking me???? this is the story of my life!!!!!!!

wow. amazing. nuf said.

wow.
wow.

amazing.

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

9 posted 2008-04-12 09:37 PM

ummm, sorry for the freak out before.

really nice poem.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

10 posted 2008-04-12 10:55 PM

lol it made me laugh

JJ

Amic
Junior Member

since 2008-02-17

Posts 39
...I think Im lost again...

11 posted 2008-04-13 02:42 AM

lol thanks... nice to know Im not alone in the feeling!

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