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Teen Poetry #8

broken heart

softballstar
Junior Member

since 2008-03-11

Posts 15
USA

0 posted 2008-03-27 06:14 PM

hey...soo yea heres another poem its kinda bad but just let me know what you think.

When he broke your heart, you asked him, why?
He said it wasn't you, it was him.
Another girl he had by his side.
He told you then not to cry
And again, you asked him, why?
He said he knows he's caused you pain
Hes the one who made you walk in rain
But he's sorry so why do you cry?
Because, you say.
You used to care.
You said through everything
You would be there.
So what happened to forever?
Do you even care
That its because of you that I'm like this?
Again, he says hes sorry.
Sorry is NOT good enough you scream.
Sorry does NOT mean anything to me.
Its just a spoken lie,
A word made flesh, a threat.
Just like I love you, a lie.

March 2008

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2008-03-28 02:32 PM

ooo dang i loved this. it wasnt the best ever but it was really great! so dont think its bad!!!!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-03-29 04:22 AM

oh Katie hunn, this was such a sad poem.. I hate guys like that. hope you are doing ok.
Krysti

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

3 posted 2008-03-29 04:07 PM

nice write

Katarina
Junior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 15
AUSTRALIA, N.S.W

4 posted 2008-03-29 07:02 PM

its so pretty

softballstar
Junior Member

since 2008-03-11

Posts 15
USA

5 posted 2008-03-29 09:51 PM

thanks

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