questioning tears... - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #8

questioning tears...

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-03-26 10:43 PM

Am i not good enough for
tears to flow, for there
to be a loneliness when
I leave. Am i not good enough
to be loved for, or for
the sky to share my pain?
Would i be missed?
Would i be loved?
would there be tears for me
if i were to leave....

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-03-27 04:02 AM

awee hunn such a sad write. i hope thing work. Emily any one who doesn't love you or proves they love you isnt worth your time. but you never know they could love you more than anything in the whole world!
Krysti

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-03-27 11:41 PM

great write! and yes im sure you would be missed!!

[This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (03-28-2008 05:35 PM).]

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-03-28 02:38 PM

sounds like the song "good enough" by Evanesence. thats my favorite song. this poem was written beautifully

XxZachXx

"What did you think I ment?"

haha yes im sort of crazy deep down inside. lol!!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.