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softballstar
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since 2008-03-11
Posts 15
USA

0 posted 2008-03-25 07:32 PM



The blood
Pouring
Just like the tears
Oh- I haven't hurt this bad
In so many years.

I cry for you
I cry for me
I cry for us
I wish we were together you see

Alone I wake
In the middle of the night
Longing to see
Just a tiny glimpse of light

Why did this happen?
Why did you have to go?
Down-down I fall
Just like the cold-cold snow

I too, have become bitter you see
My heart is like stone
Cold and loveless
Like the sea

Because of you- I can no longer
Love again
But on the bright side
At least your my friend

So for you I'll smile
And then I will cry
Because we'll always only be friends
That's why

© Copyright 2008 Katie - All Rights Reserved
XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2008-03-25 11:00 PM


oh my goodness, i absolutley LOVE it! at first it seems sad, but then you feel another emotion. like ur happy that u can be frieds, but still ur heart aches because u can only be that. This is wonderful, i will put it in my library!

    {~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

softballstar
Junior Member
since 2008-03-11
Posts 15
USA
2 posted 2008-03-26 08:25 PM


hey, thanks glad u like it
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