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Bff-Lover-Stranger-WHO ARE U? |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
this is soooo old but like im trying to post up all my old stuff from my notebooks so yea. really old tho. you were that hyper tomboy that ive known since 6th grade we soon become friends i didnt know it was the begining of my life being changed by seventh grade you told me your secret that ive willingly kept it took us all summer to realize that we were best friends just yet 8th grade was my worst year there was hell at home but you held my hand the whole way through and never a soul you told you were my very best friend we were tighter than tight and ill never forget the best thing in my life in this time i wondered what it would be like if you so happened to like me i knew it would never be so but it was just my curiosity i thought that i would be strong to back off and just say no i tried to make you stop but i soon became just as low in march you went to italy and came back to find you were crushing on me as i had been the whole time we never made it official we were just there then you pushed me away like you didnt care in june you caved and kissed me so confused i was you said you mom was suspicious and you never stopped falling in love we were practically together but we werent committed and in august, suicide, and into the hostpital i was admitted that was the end of our relationship almost the end of our friendship too but that came later in october after you went to your new school i dont need to go into details talking of how weve changed bottom line was that i got closer to god and you just walked away this poem was for me so that i could realize that i dont know the person my world revolved around and come to know that she has died. the person living inside you is a just a possesion of something bad the real you isnt there you didnt say goodbye but i really wish u had i loved who you were and the life you led but now your away from god and we all know only he can raise the dead so i guess this is me saying goodbye learning to let go this sucks cuz i still love who you were as a friend and as more but that person wont come back so i just need to forget it hurts too much to hope for a friend ill never again get only a vampire can love you forever. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
umm kewl poem do u think the person will come back? |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Leah such a sad beautifully written poem. love it Krysti |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
justanotherstorm: idk it hurts too much to think about it. thanx krysti only a vampire can love you forever. |
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SilentSpeaker New Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 6 |
I really enjoyed this poem. I'm in the middle of the very same thing right now. You did very well at capturing it. "I love you not because of who you are, but rather because of who I am around you." |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
silentspeaker:welcome to passions! and thank u very much.  only a vampire can love you forever. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
o ok cool i guess |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
u know who its about. only a vampire can love you forever. |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
...no why |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
i didnt ask. i said only a vampire can love you forever. |
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Tripp'ncutie Member
since 2008-05-05
Posts 73minnasota |
wow...that is all i can say. just wow. |
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brakeonthroo New Member
since 2008-04-30
Posts 4 |
I like your poem... great work. I can relate. |
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