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rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
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0 posted 2008-03-25 05:36 PM


this is so old and not even finished so yea..

god im trying so hard
but why cant i see
the reason youre doing
all of this to me

i know that life is difficult
and no one said that its be easy
but why god? why?
why me?

cant i just have
that wonderful bliss
the thing they all talk about
called happiness?

do i have to be your servant
cant you find someone else?
i love to help you god
but i cant do this by myself

my futre is so ambiguous
you make things so unclear
its hard to trust a shakey thing
when only pain is near

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

© Copyright 2008 leah nelson - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2008-03-26 01:20 AM


ohhh Leah hunn are you sure yooh are ok..? such a sad beautifully written poem. But hunn as my advice take it one step at a time. Do what makes you most happy. Dont worry bout what n e one else will think or feel. Sometimes yooh gotta put yourself first.
Love yooh
Krysti

justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 321

2 posted 2008-03-26 01:30 AM


we are all his servants in some way
im here for u...for real

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
3 posted 2008-03-26 08:48 PM


His laws, the things we have to do as his servants are there for the express perpose of making us happy.
"And men are that they might have joy."
Sadness comes with rebellion, with falling away and believe me I know all about that. But happiness comes from having Gods spirit and Gods Spirit comes when you live his commandments (which never change)! And what a happiness it is!

I loved your poem! Its going to my library.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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