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Amic
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since 2008-02-17
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...I think Im lost again...

0 posted 2008-03-25 02:57 PM



I no longer ask that you do anything
All I want is for you to listen
I know
That no matter what I say
This is up to you
I’ve done my part
If you choose to live with him
Then the pain you cause your children
Is on your shoulders

Now
All I ask is that you listen
To my account of
What happened?
I know that I cannot make you change your mind
But
I let go now
And give the Lord power over us
I know that without him there will be no hope

So I
Let him heal me
And ask him to show you
The things you must do
To heal your family

Don’t let your husband
Destroy
What you have left
I know you think you’ve lost me
But you had me until now
Today is the day
That you have shown me your feelings
Today is the day
That you have shown me
That I am not worth it to you
You don’t
Want to stand
So I will
End this now



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1 posted 2008-03-25 03:27 PM


ohh Brittany hunn, I know exactly how you are feeling. Hope things work out for your family.
Best wishes
Krysti
ps.. Great poem!!

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