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Teen Poetry #8

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Jeffry Dogma
Junior Member

since 2008-03-24

Posts 13

0 posted 2008-03-24 07:47 PM

At the watering hole, they hide their flaws.
through money and clothes that cover the raw.
Sitting in silence, thoughts of how they look.
and what was the first impression people took.
but how of you can it be what they care
when just like you, they worry more of their hair.
A sunbath as to get noticed you try
but occupied with themselves, they walk by..
I bet if you noticed someone but you,
maybe they would then notice you too.

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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-03-25 03:25 AM

Welcome to Passion Jeffry!!!! Great to have yooh heer.. hope to read more soon! very descriptive 1st post...
Krysti

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

2 posted 2008-03-25 11:05 AM

Good write..welcome to pip

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-03-25 11:42 PM

Wonderful poem, it's like u were describing a picture. Welcome to pip!

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