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rebelangelv
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0 posted 2008-03-23 05:19 PM


sorry God
sorry for my sins
but i cant help it
im falling in love again
it may be wrong
well i know that it is
but no one else loves me
and i just cant resist
im gunna play it out
and if anyone wants to play too
then they can join the game
but the ones that i love are few
this kills me to hurt you god
but my flesh is so weak
just dont worry about this part of my life
dont let it hurt you please
sorry god
sorry jesus
but this desire is burning
and i really cant resist
im gunna cry
cuz i know this is wrong
but ill be happy in my sin
that sounds horrible but im not strong
IM SORRY

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

© Copyright 2008 leah nelson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-03-23 06:54 PM


oh Leah hunn... yooh shouldn't feel like its a sin to fll in love.. sure it may seems like a bad thing to do. but hey we all do it everyone! and never think that God wont forgive you for falling in love..
Krysti

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2 posted 2008-03-23 08:53 PM


u said that ur a real christian
so i told u to stay that way
not wanting to go to church
is acting pretty fake

im sorry if u took it wrong
i didnt mean for u to hurt
but u need god more than ever
since ur wanting to change, to convert

god should be first
so dont let things get in the way
did he died a bloodly death for YOU
just so that u could go astray?

God knows what your going thru
no one else needs to know
but y should he care if u dont even wanna visit him
because u dont wanna go?

i dont need u to tell me
i havent asked
i already know
so dont act like i lack

u want me back as a friend
well im going to push and preach
ur gunna have to trust me
but its God that ur gunna meet

u put this in my poem
and now ur saying ur gonna hurt God
love aint no sin its a gift from God
why r u doing this whatever u r doing
u told me once that u didnt want to be apart of my game i never played a game with u ever
but now u want to play a game.. why whats up? whats wrong? why r u gona hurt God like u said he bled 4 u dont do w/e ur gonna do

"god should be first
so dont let things get in the way
did he died a bloodly death for YOU
just so that u could go astray?"
these r ur words not mine

justanotherstorm
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3 posted 2008-03-23 09:01 PM


btw ur not just hurting God..

whatever happens whatever ur gonna do
no matter what
im here for u k

rebelangelv
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4 posted 2008-03-23 09:25 PM


yea..maybe im a hypocrite, and im not perfect, but this isnt something that ima have to apologize to u about. wut im about to do is not a gift from god and i know it.im doing it cuz of wut happened yesterday, which u dont know. u say i dont know n e thing. u dont know n e thing either. u dont have the slightest clue. do u didnt play a game wit me , u just broke my heart in every possible way. a harsh way that sucked out everything i had in me and its part of the reason that ima go play it back but twice as hard now. a lot of things are up and i dont wanna hurt god but i think i have to or im just gunna do sumthin else that will hurt him and me. and it will take a lot more persauding to talk me out of what ima about to do now.
listen ppls, this poem is confusing and i will prolly be the only one to understand it. u may b able to figure out a couple of the stuff but u wont b able to understand the real meaning.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
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5 posted 2008-03-23 09:50 PM


leah whats going on

rebelangelv
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6 posted 2008-03-23 09:50 PM


like u care

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justanotherstorm
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7 posted 2008-03-23 10:17 PM


i do care
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8 posted 2008-03-23 10:19 PM


play your drama out somewhere private!
rebelangelv
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9 posted 2008-03-23 10:27 PM


sry sea

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Falling rain
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10 posted 2008-03-24 08:58 AM


Its not sinful to love. God (last time i checked) said that it was okay to love another. so why are you apologizing or you loving? this doesn't make sense and its confusing. i just simpl don't understand this. can you explain this?

XxZachXx

"What did you think I ment?"

haha yes im sort of crazy deep down inside. lol!!



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11 posted 2008-03-24 11:47 AM


Falling rain- i dont think she means love is a sin but what shes going to do??
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12 posted 2008-03-24 03:56 PM


hey hey,
  love is not a sin(fer sure not), but lust, pre-marital sex and adultury are. what ever you have done in the past, God will forgive you if you ask (he'd better, it's already been pre-paid). HE loves YOU. in the bible he calls us his servants, his friends, his children and it just keeps getting better, including calling us his wife. God gave us the gift of love, and the gift of sex. he gave us urges and knows what we feel like when we love some one.
  just keep loving God, and all the rules(commandments) will be easy to follow. fer ex. there was a beautiful flower bed in a park. the sign read (in german) "picking flowers is forbidden". (in english) "please do not pick the flowers". (in french) "if you love flowers, you will not pick them".
   God is like the french sign. he wants you to love him, and if you love him, you will gladly do as he asks. it will be easy not to covet or lust, if you truly love God.
  this might not be helpful at all, and i'm having some troubles with my faith as well, so i might not be the best person to give advice (what do you know?... i'm a hypocrite as well.). this is just what I got out of the poem, and figured maybe i could help you out.
  !Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

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13 posted 2008-03-24 04:52 PM


from what im told go loves all and forgives. nice write

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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14 posted 2008-03-24 09:55 PM


oh i see now.. i can see how you would think that would be sinful.

XxZachXx

"What did you think I ment?"

haha yes im sort of crazy deep down inside. lol!!



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15 posted 2008-03-24 10:29 PM


Leah Sweetie, Talk to me....

XXOO

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16 posted 2008-03-25 03:38 AM


ohh yooh shoudn't worrie about that hunn.. you know things happen and if you feel like its the right thing to do at the time then go for it! Just know I'm always here for you babe... im worried bout yooh.. email me plzzzz
Love you XoXo
Krysti

rebelangelv
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17 posted 2008-03-25 05:05 PM


ppls realax. its jsuta poem it dont mean nothing and its confusing so only i will really understand wut i mean by the whole love thing and wut my sin is that im going to do. dont read between the lines pipsters, im fine. thank u all n e way tho. luv u all

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
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18 posted 2008-03-26 01:28 AM


do u really?
rebelangelv
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19 posted 2008-03-27 12:31 PM


do i really wut?

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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