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0 posted 2008-03-21 02:59 AM



he'll tuck me in at night
make sure i'm safe and warm
he makes me dinner all the time
he can sure cook up a storm!

He tells me he loves me
all throughout the day
tells me i'm amazing
and he still turns around to say

that he's the lucky one.
but he doesn't know how much i need him
he doesn't know I can't live without him

He carries me to the bathroom
when I've had to much to drink
he even holds my hair back
as i'm bent over the sink

he says we'll be together always
and he'll take care of me
we'll be so young and in love
yet be living free and easy

you think that you're the lucky one
but I can say, babey thats not true
because its me that is the lucky one
to have found someone like you!
~~~~~~hmmm.. ohh dear... i just cant write anymore.. haha....mmmmhm~~~~~


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1 posted 2008-03-21 07:01 AM


sounds like your both lucky. good poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 2008-03-21 10:08 PM


ohhhhhhhh that's so sweet, what a man.

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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