Take the truth,December is full of sorrows.

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Teen Poetry #8

Take the truth,December is full of sorrows.

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-03-18 10:52 PM

This is a poem I wrote for my friend...tony he is having relationship problems and he is thinking about breaking up with his girlfriend which he knows is a dumb choice...but i wrote about it because it sparked ideas so
enjoy.---------------------------------------------
Take my word, it is the truth
Your problem cannot be confessed in a booth
If you end this now, you will regret
I knew that you will love each other ever since you've met

If you make this choice, you will least expect that
It will hurt you both, you won't even chat
i will make you agree, but don't be too late
But it is never to late to fix and repair you fate

You will have to fight, it comes with love
But if you choose to move on, i will catch you with a glove
Nothing that I say can make you decide
But if you think that the choice you make won't effect the people outside

your wrong

I'm trying to tell you right from wrong, the truth I'm no liar
There's no time to sit and think, just climb on higher
Desperately I try to help, but you don't listen
I write for you, you will glisten

Just follow your heart and try to be alive with a flame
Keep it a low flame that you can keep tame
ake the move that you will remember
Don't ruin it and make it feel like December

--Keagan

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-03-19 08:22 AM

This is a great poem. *better than what i usually write* and im glad that ur using poetry to help others. but i heard lat night i guess u were a little too late to stop them from breaking up. great poem any way

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-03-19 04:07 PM

sounds like some good advice. nice write

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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