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Teen Poetry #8

The SeaShore

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2008-03-17 10:15 PM

The SeaShore

Gently and softly
The wave to the cloud
Had said that in mourning
The wind howled aloud

But softly yet- and silent
The cloud did move abroad
Opening her gentle rain
To the sea she laud

And still the jealous wind
Forsook that task so bold
That crime against the ages, he
Refused to ‘ere grow old

The sea did haunt in torment
This unforgiving toll
For none did understand the wind
Except for she in lull

But returning to her depths
For the wind her face refused
The sea did meet the shore line
And in comfort she did use

The story of the cruelest parts
The moaning she endured
Had cut across her barren face
And she herself insured

That none could ever being to pass
The parting of the sea
For her most beloved shore
He gave her all for free

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-03-18 02:07 PM

ohh Kate Darlin' is that really yooh??? ohhh t is so good to see yooh here again!!! sensationalle write!!!
loved it
Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2008-03-18 04:15 PM

thanks- busy and exaughsting life called- i answered the door and they kidnapped me for a good while. inspiration flew out hte door, but recently crawled back in threw the window- very appoligetically. i might add, lol. it's been a sick sick life.

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

3 posted 2008-03-19 03:51 PM

great flow love the poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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