GOD LOVES SINNERS BUT HATES SIN

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Teen Poetry #8

GOD LOVES SINNERS BUT HATES SIN

justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

0 posted 2008-03-15 10:57 PM

GOD
YOU LOVE ME
AND I LOVE YOU TOO
YOU HATE MY SINS
AND I HATE THEM TOO
YET YOU STILL LOVE ME
A SINNER IN THIS CORRUPT WORLD
WHEN I HEAR YOUR NAME
MY STOMACH CURLS
CUZ IVE MADE MISTAKES
AND SOMETIMES I ACT FAKE
YET YOU STILL LOVE ME
A SINNER
YET IM A WINNER
BECAUSE YOU LOVE ME
WHY WOULD YOU DIE FOR US SINNERS
IF YOU DIDNT LOVE US
YOU GAVE US A CHANCE TO WIN
TO FIGHT OUR SIN
BECAUSE OF THE BLOOD YOU SHED
OUR LIFE YOU HELD
YOUR LOVE YOU SHARED
BECAUSE YOU LOVE US SINNERS
AND HATE OUR SINS
YOU SAVED OUR LIVES
BECAUSE OF YOU
WE WILL WIN

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2008-03-15 10:59 PM

awsome

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

2 posted 2008-03-15 11:11 PM

i know lol
haha i forgot to turn off caps haha im dumb oh well i aint perfect

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

3 posted 2008-03-15 11:41 PM

o i thought u were jsut doing that.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

4 posted 2008-03-15 11:55 PM

I MENT ON MY OTHER 1 oops i did it again lol

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

5 posted 2008-03-15 11:58 PM

nice...

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

starpower
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 82
Utah

6 posted 2008-03-16 01:30 AM

That was a great poem and it has left a spot in my heart

You can send me an email,
Thanks

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

7 posted 2008-03-16 10:59 AM

hey hey,
i like the caps, it made a point. good write.
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

8 posted 2008-03-16 05:56 PM

thnx ppl

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