Bitter Feelings, Bitter Ends

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Teen Poetry #8

Bitter Feelings, Bitter Ends

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-03-14 06:38 PM

this rancid taste
is in my mouth
its just something
that i cant get out

its on my tounge
like cheap champaigne
and no matter what i do
it wont wash away

just burn me more
and spark the flame
just ride this out
and feel the change

bitter feelings
bitter friends
they alway meet
with bitter ends

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-03-14 06:52 PM

isn't any kind of ending like this, bitter? I mean if it wasn't you would never move on...when it doesn't work, it's a lesson. What did you learn that you liked about this person, or...this KIND of person? What did you learn that you didn't? Then when you meet someone else, you will be quicker at recognizing those things you want in a girl/young lady. And after a few dozen heart breaks, when you meet "the one" you will know.

Take it for what it was, and move on.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-03-14 08:05 PM

i like this alot great write!

~frustrated writer~
Member

since 2008-02-25

Posts 84

3 posted 2008-03-14 10:27 PM

nice write1

can relate to this..

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