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Teen Poetry #8

a unfaithful friend

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-03-13 05:55 PM

With every breath
Your blade goes in deep
I cry tears of blood
Your blade of innocence seeps as i weep

"Why did you do this?"
I gasp while i lie on the floor
I'll never trust you!
Nevermore...

Your deceteful lies
Hidden behind your face
I wish not to see you again
But you had to do it. that was your case

I cry in the corner
Never sleeping
I lie in wait
Alway weeping

With one final gasp
The deed is done
My light went out
Like the setting sun
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I was writing about a friend who turned out not to be a freind of mine... so don't take this literately.

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-03-13 06:02 PM

awe, this is so sad! And it's got to be your best poem yet, Great job.
......did someone say library..?
{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

RedNail
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

2 posted 2008-03-14 08:05 AM

Great poem. As always. ^^

Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride.

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

3 posted 2008-03-14 01:15 PM

GREAT JOB!LOVED IT

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

4 posted 2008-03-14 07:17 PM

great poem i know how you feel

starpower
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 82
Utah

5 posted 2008-03-14 09:42 PM

Wow that was a good poem

You can send me an email,
Thanks

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

6 posted 2008-03-14 10:19 PM

everything i expected from you.

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