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Teen Poetry #8

Break-Up

softballstar
Junior Member

since 2008-03-11

Posts 15
USA

0 posted 2008-03-13 05:48 PM

Hey I wrote this yesterday after I had a fight with my boyfriend. I'm thinking about giving this to him but I think that's kinda mean if I break up with him through a poem but.. idk tell me what you think.

BREAK-UP

I gave u a second chance
even a third and forth
but this time i will walk away
with no regrets or remorse

I really thought u were the one
to stay forever and true
I love u more then anything
I'm sorry but were through

I'll always remember the times we had
and never ever forget
a part of me will always love you
but u had forgotten respect

i do however want u to know
that you have been forgiven
just promise me you won't forget
and continue to keep on living

Hopefully we'll still be friends
cause I will always care
even though were not together
remember ill always be there

please understand i love you
but i can't do this without trust
and now that is no longer
moving on is a must

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-03-13 06:02 PM

this is a GREAT POST!! for a first time posting. I really like this and on your problem. maybe you should give this too him. if your seriously are going to break up with him then i think you should. its a easy way to let him go without him getting upset.

This poem is deffenently going in my library! and i almost forgot welcome to PIP!!

softballstar
Junior Member

since 2008-03-11

Posts 15
USA

2 posted 2008-03-13 08:47 PM

thanks and yea i gave it to him told him we done but still either way we were both upset but theres nothing i can do about that

starpower
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 82
Utah

3 posted 2008-03-13 10:07 PM

Hey that was a great poem and I am sorry that you had to break-up with your boyfriend and I had to break-up with my own boyfirend. You can send me an email at Starpower60@hotmail.com

You can send me an email,
Thanks

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