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ily06.12.07
Junior Member
since 2007-11-24
Posts 15


0 posted 2008-03-11 06:47 PM


Today the tears will fall,
I need you  here so bad,
but I never seem to win.

Promises will be replaced with Im sorry.

Yesterday's will always have tomarrows,
but today Im without you.

I wonder how you need so much if you keep me so far away.

I need you here,
I want you here,
do you want to be here?

Im so happy for you,
I jusy don't want things to change.

How can I bring you sunshine if im in so much pain,
I love you and i need you here more and more every day.

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maddorani
Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
1 posted 2008-03-11 07:00 PM


hey for the title u could name it I NEED YOU HERE
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-03-11 09:26 PM


I like the way how its not titled

ARCTIC WIND

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