Subjects are for the lost at heart

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Teen Poetry #8

Subjects are for the lost at heart

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2008-03-11 12:20 PM

I'm quite drunk and everything blurs
at the edges, however
that allows my vision to focus on you
across the room.
following you is some challenge
as someone has fermented my wine a bit
more than usual.
kiss my red lips.
pull on my numb fingers and send some sort of
shock
through this dull sensory system.
damn, I'm so drunk.
you're not even there.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-03-12 01:13 AM

ohh i like this Alex.. mainly cos i can relate to this and i understand the feeling in this poem!! great to read a poem from you again

Krysti

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-03-13 12:52 PM

LOVE THIS.. been so busy lately caught up in my own life i hadn't seen it. love your work always do.. please don't leave here.. i envy your talent.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2008-03-28 12:04 PM

thank you both.

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