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tiny_ME
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0 posted 2008-03-10 11:50 PM


Hey look and check-out this boy
Girls for him are just like toys
He changes his girlfriends a lot
and forgets their names just like that.

At first look he would seem to be hot
and makes everyone cheer because of what he got.
He baths that magic cologne
to get girl's number and save on his phone.

He drives a fast sports car
that could drive his dates pretty too far.
After such he lets out sweet phrases
making you blush and go into bruises.

Girls be warned he wears a mask
After such moments he's gone in a flash
Leaving you alone with those tears
trying to move on from the break-up for years.


_i made this after hearing love stories of my friends :p_



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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2008-03-12 01:24 AM


i hate guys like that ger!!! nice poem though
Krysti

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2 posted 2008-03-12 03:19 AM


i hate boys like that to (even though i am a guy) great poem

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

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3 posted 2008-03-12 09:35 AM


guys like that are jerks. i hate guys like him (but im a guy) great first post!! i can't wait to see more.

~Zach~  

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~



ShawtySheFly
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4 posted 2008-03-17 11:37 AM


rrraww i hate them suckers they get u all twizted. i'm prbly the most guy crazy grl ppl kno and damn i hate those boys LOL good poem anyway......i'm taking it that the guys above are sweet?????? and cool like dat right, i mean if they not actin too cool do you get me or no??? oh well tight job

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wisdomofthesword
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5 posted 2008-03-19 03:43 PM


yea not sure, but thanks for calling us sweet

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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