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RevengeIsMine
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0 posted 2008-03-08 09:46 PM


Why do you do this, keep pushing your way in?
For god sakes don’t you know by now that I’m not letting you win?
I’m crying yet again, because all you do is make it worse
I don’t want you’re pity, because it’s only a deadly curse

Why do you need to put me, through so much pain?
If only you knew the real reason I’m partially insane
I’m so tired of living that i do nothing but cry
You take away the best from me so god please let me die

I’m living in a world of hate and you’re the center of it all
You don’t know nothing, so just sit and watch me fall
It’ll be your problem when I’m gone and you’re the reason why
If only i could feel better, if only I couldn’t cry

Tell me why you would want to break a perfectly good heart
Just to see me fall down, and tear myself apart
You’ll miss when I’m gone, and I’ll be gone tonight
Life not about what’s better, it’s about what’s right.


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Falling rain
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1 posted 2008-03-08 11:01 PM


Jess this is really good!!!!!!! hope things get better!!!


Clockwork_Orange
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2 posted 2008-03-09 09:08 AM


yes i agree. very well written. i like this alot.
Earl Robertson
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3 posted 2008-03-09 02:30 PM


This is very beautiful, very sad and very true. Good write!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
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Neverland
4 posted 2008-03-09 07:36 PM


Awe, Jessie hun! I love it. But don't worry, I'll catch you when you fall. You did it for me and I'll to the same for you,
luv ya!

  {~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

maddorani
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houston,tx
5 posted 2008-03-09 09:22 PM


i agree it is a nice poem
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