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justanotherstorm
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0 posted 2008-03-07 04:07 PM


is because of You
the reason why
i used to cut
the reason why
i still cuss
the reason why
im so confused
the reason why
i always loose
the reason why
im all alone
the reason why
i cant go home
the reason why
i left my place
the reason why
i ran away
the reason why
is because of You

this wont make sense to anyone so yea

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1 posted 2008-03-07 04:48 PM


this make perfect sence! i can understand completely!  
rebelangelv
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2 posted 2008-03-07 09:10 PM


u capitalized You...

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
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3 posted 2008-03-08 12:32 PM


im talking about myself and no one else
i wrote it during computers class

rebelangelv
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4 posted 2008-03-08 01:14 AM


yo i didnt say u were tlaking about n e 1. so u wrote it to urself? k. cool.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
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5 posted 2008-03-08 08:11 PM


well i capitalized You cuz it meant me iono but yea
rebelangelv
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6 posted 2008-03-09 09:30 PM


hmmm interesting..still weird...so if ur the reason u do that stuff that obviously is hurting u otherwise u wouldnt be writing like that...y dont u stop doing w/.e it is ur doing that makes u do all that. ( wow that was a lot of u's)

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

maddorani
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7 posted 2008-03-09 09:36 PM


i liked it hehe
justanotherstorm
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8 posted 2008-03-10 04:21 PM


thnx

rebel: i am stopping

rebelangelv
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9 posted 2008-03-12 06:56 PM


thats great to hear, do u knwo wut that really means tho?

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

justanotherstorm
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10 posted 2008-03-13 12:26 PM


im just expressin my feelings
yea i kno wat it means

rebelangelv
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11 posted 2008-03-13 02:20 AM


u know what it really means to "stop wut ur doing to make u free??"

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

starpower
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12 posted 2008-03-13 02:31 PM


Wow I love the poem good work and keep wirting your heart out to the world
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