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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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i cant breath your choking me your the only face id care to see and here we are we've come so far let's get farther lets steal a car i want a one way trip out of this place i know im tired of this town i just want to go so take my hand and hold on tight ill take you with me into the night youll be my lady and ill call you baby you cant look away your fixed on my face your mine |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Hmmm...good write, you are very talented. (I've told you this before I think) Now is it just me or is this poem a little dark. I dunno maybe it's just that I'm sick today. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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