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Crystalline (3/4/08)
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Crystalline (3/4/08) |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Crystalline (3/4/08) Crystalline eyes of glass Have seen the better days When love was real and comfort Came when time was mazed We titter on the edge Of what is real and what is fake We missed too many changes So it’s time for a second take As we go to the rip That our fancy words have made We find that our brave faces Hide the fact that we’re afraid The fragmented piece of soul That this world picked upon Is dying out so quickly Alas! It’s almost gone The spidery cuts that cover The glass breakers I did know Have finally brought together The love we could not show and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Ok I've read this and re-read this and I can't attach great meaning to it! I feel as if it's lurking just beyond the depths of my conscienceness, waiting for the least opportune moment to click! (I'm slightly frustrated.) Anyway, this was a beautiful poem Kate. The flow was absolutly marvelous, and I do enjoy riddles despite how stumped I am on this one! (I will get it eventualy...) "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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