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Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

0 posted 2008-03-05 02:26 AM

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My name is John Esler
and today I bid ado
to a world of hate
and approach life anew.

Thunder clouds will
set off in the sky,
as I sail past those
who left me behind.

They will see in me
the truth I kept
secret from them
in their ignorance.

My actions will force
those who can't see
to be aware of those
who are just like me.

I will be a symbol
beyond words or expression.
My sacrifice will be
that of holy intentions.

The beacon of light
that will shoot from
the rock I stand upon
will reach to the heavens,

converting those who see
the truth it posses
and the possibilities
that will come from it.

My imprint on this world
will sadly be forgotten,
but don't be dismayed
for more like I will arrive

to remind you of what
you have done to those
who have been sacrifices
for the good of mankind.

_______________________________

Just a note:

This is a fictional expression, not revealing any personal thoughts or ideas. This was made to portray the kind of mindset experienced by those who are in need of attention and help.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-03-05 09:22 AM

I think this just barely skates around the guidelines, but yeah, crazy people say stuff like this for sure....

Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

2 posted 2008-03-05 07:05 PM

ok, i thought it was kinda on the border too. i just wanted to portray the type of mindset shown by people who are like this

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-03-05 07:25 PM

lol yeah I'm not sure if this is crazy profound or emo.
Probably all three in places, so I'll consintrate on the profound, and try to ignore the...other stuff.
Great poem anyway! I realy enjoyed it.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-03-05 07:37 PM

yea this is way on the border. great write though!

~Zach~

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