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rebelangelv
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0 posted 2008-03-04 09:52 PM



again, dont care if the flowers are accurate, and this has on opposite titled "The Dark Valentine"
and yes i know its totally old

Roses are red
Violets are blue
You love me
And I love you!

Daises are yellow
Tulips are white
I don't want anyone
But you in my sight!

Carnations are purple
Daffodils are green
I want you in my life
It's you I always need!

Some flowers are pretty
But most can't compare
To the strength of our love
So kiss me now if you dare!!!

(come on, i dare u hehe :0 )

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

© Copyright 2008 leah nelson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-03-04 10:07 PM


haha i like the little comment at the end lol!! a little bit corny but great write lol!

~Zach~

rebelangelv
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2 posted 2008-03-04 10:08 PM


heheh yea i was bored in class so i wrote. lol hahah thanks.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Earl Robertson
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3 posted 2008-03-04 10:13 PM


Corny yes...But hey I like corny!!


"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

rebelangelv
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4 posted 2008-03-04 10:16 PM


hahaa but conry is funny so im down lol

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

hiddensmiles
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5 posted 2008-03-04 10:23 PM


nice job!


rebelangelv
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6 posted 2008-03-04 10:24 PM


hahah thanks again :]

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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