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Another day of you
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Another day of you |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work 
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We stand there and talk like we used to everday but now its different because i know you don't want to stay I force the conversation Can you see the sadness in my eyes? I thought you were supposed to be different Not like those other guys You don't care about the tears I have cried You don't care about all the times you lied You don't care about anything but you and you know you used me theres nothing i can do so here i am wishing none of it were true so i wouldn't have to wake up to another day of you |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
love this Jezz... I'm guessing this is a Jeremy inspired poem? That kid...hot cold hot cold...lol but what a cutie...  love you!! |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Well written! I really like the sound of your voice here...honest and vulnerable - without giving in. BTW...have a notion you're worth way more than he's giving you! Hugs, Rob |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Jezzika, it sounds like you and I are going through the same thing another day of you...yeah it's hard sometimes great write! I relate! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jezzika~ I just love it when I see your name here~ Hm, sounds like my teen years too~ Some guys just don't get it ... do they ? Keep writing, hon~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Very nice Jezz. I think I can empathize to a certain degree. Even if I am a guy you know. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Sadly some guys are like this. Its really sad to see someone get hurt.. I hope thing get better!!  ~Zach~ |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
Mom~ Lol this very much is a Jeremy inspired poem. I never know what to do with that kid…but dang….he is fine  thanks for replying love you tooRob~ Thanks for replying your comment was really sweet… I guess I do deserve better but I am kinda stuck in that cycle… where no matter what you do they are always there lolDixie~ Thanks for reading my poem…it is hard because no matter how much you want to wake up and everything be better and not have to deal with them…it never works out that way lol Marge~ Lol at this point NO guys are getting it….I am stuck picking a bunch of retards lol thanks for replying Earl~ I defiantly agree that guys can relate to this because sometimes they are trying to move on but that one girl is still there not letting go lol thanks for reading my poem |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
ooops lol sorry zach you snuck in there while i was replying thanks for reading my poem your comment was really sweet |
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KeyLimeSorbet Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 74Colorado |
I dont like that kid lol, he's totally not worth it, and not good enough for you! We will have to flirt with some more waiters to get our minds off crappy boys :-( |
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