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krad008
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0 posted 2008-03-04 03:30 PM

I don't know who you are baby
I don't know what your favorite color is
I don't know your favorite food
I don't know your favorite tv show
I don't know your favorite band

But I do know were both going to be far away
Were going to start are new lives after high school and move on with everything

I don't know your favorite restraunt
I don't know your favorite animal
I don't know what makes you laugh

But I do know were suppost to be together
I do know your the prettiest girl in the whole school
Your smile is the brightest

I don't know if were ever going to be together in high school
I don't know if were gonna both be happy with are lives
I don't know if you think im good enough for you

I do know Im shy
I do know I keep to myself
I do know I love your smile
I do know you make me wanna live life longer
I do know you make me wanna be rich, so I can take you to the fanciest places

I know were always gonna keep in touch
I know were gonna be happy for each other
I know were gonna regret the past
I know were gonna wish we tried
I know were gonna make it

I know I need you with all my heart

Baby your all that matters in this little world
Your my diamond just waiting to be found

[This message has been edited by krad008 (03-04-2008 06:06 PM).]

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1 posted 2008-03-04 04:40 PM

maybe you should give this to her, maybe at graduation?

oh and I know you didn't ask for critiques, but to make it more romantic, spell 'know' correctly...spell all the words, correctly.

But it is very sweet and I bet she would love to get this... what girl wouldn't?!

krad008
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2 posted 2008-03-04 05:14 PM

thats a good thought I dunno though

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3 posted 2008-03-04 05:25 PM

you have some time, think it over

Put it in a card...maybe write it in a blank card? I'm telling you, she won't forget it.

krad008
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4 posted 2008-03-04 05:26 PM

are you a guy or girl if you dont mind me asking? Beause ill trust a girls word over a guys word more often lol when it comes to t his stuff

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5 posted 2008-03-04 05:28 PM

LOL
I'm a girl...a daughter...a sister...a mother...a wife.

if someone would have given me something like that at graduation, I never would have forgotten it, and who knows? Life is fun that way....good luck!

krad008
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6 posted 2008-03-04 05:29 PM

ah man now I have to trust your words because you no how this stuff works lol

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7 posted 2008-03-04 05:37 PM

LOL

sometimes...it might help that I have two daughters...

one graduated last year, one this year.

and I know both of them would think the gesture romantic....not just me

krad008
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8 posted 2008-03-04 05:41 PM

Well im gonna run it by a few of my friends who are girls also and see what they think.
Thanks for the advice though I really apprecaite it.
Can I publish this lol. I love this poem. No any sites that publish?

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9 posted 2008-03-04 05:46 PM

I know you are gonna make me crazy with the 'no' thing going on there...LOL

you are welcome, I hope it helps.

No, I don't know where you can go to publish it, but I do know that your spelling would have to be correct...*cough cough*

(just teasin)

krad008
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10 posted 2008-03-04 05:58 PM

lol ah man I gotta change all those nos ill get on that lol

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11 posted 2008-03-04 06:00 PM

I just like messin with you about them....for me personally, poetry should be spelled correctly. Texting is different though...

I spell really badly so it bugs me...dictionary.com is my friend... LOL

krad008
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12 posted 2008-03-04 06:01 PM

fixed it

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13 posted 2008-03-04 06:04 PM

you are a good sport, thank you...missed the first one

krad008
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14 posted 2008-03-04 06:06 PM

lol how do I miss the first one ill change it right now and everything is perfect

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15 posted 2008-03-04 06:08 PM

now it is!

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16 posted 2008-03-04 06:47 PM

aaaahhhhhhhhh
This was so cute

I am SEA's daughter and I really loved this poem...if a guy gave me this I would so go for him

(btw i'm single

) just playin' but for reals this poem was excellent

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krad008
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17 posted 2008-03-05 02:03 AM

thanks jezzika

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18 posted 2008-03-13 10:34 PM

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