»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #8
»
--no title--
| Teen Poetry #8 |
|
--no title-- |
|
|
Amic Junior Member
since 2008-02-17
Posts 39...I think Im lost again... |
Im not sure that this is done.. but Im not really sure how to continue it... hmm..  ------------------------------------------------ She cries tears That nobody sees And she feels a pain That everyone “understands” She is expected to ‘Work’ through it While pretending daily That all is fine So she puts on The old mask And pretends she never told And falls when She gets home As soon as she feels safe She fails to have strength enough To stand |
||
| © Copyright 2008 Brittany - All Rights Reserved | |||
Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
wow. i know how you feel. people just dont completely understand what your feeling. but they still say "you'll get through it" or stuff like that. this is a really good poem. i can relate to it. ~Zach~ |
||
|
Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Good to be untitled ARCTIC WIND |
||
|
Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
This hits the nail on the head of my least favorite topic of all time! Why do we all stand by and let eachother hurt so? Because no one ever lets on to how much they're hurting! Why don't we reveal our pain? Oh thats right...BECAUSE WE'RE AFRAID OF BEING HURT MORE!!! We all hurt each other! Everyone plays by the kids unwritten book of rules and we cause more pain than we know! Why don't we help eachother instead of wallowing in our own pain or rejoicing in our good fortune? Why can't we do that so that people wouldn't have to be afraid to unveil their feelings? (mutters incoherently) oh I liked your poem by the way. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
||
|
shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
Earl Earl Earl..., how I love your comments! They always pick me up cause they're so funny most of the time. Just how you put things. But back to the poem... Great poem. I can relate so much to it. Just the idea of putting on a mask. Hope to hear more. TJ No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real |
||
|
Amic Junior Member
since 2008-02-17
Posts 39...I think Im lost again... |
I completely agree Earl, if we would show our emotions and be more open with others we would not be in so much pain... and yet we decide not to. Thanks for the comments guys! |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
