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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
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0 posted 2008-03-02 10:01 PM


Secrets

Secrets define what we know of this life
Explain our joys our sorrows and strife
The secrets of which we never shall breathe
Enter our souls and never will leave
The secrets of darkness will make us live night
Those of the daytime will turn us to light
When every secret thought then is told
Then we will know why sorrows old
And joys that seemed beyond our grasp
Are here, our source found at last

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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In Love <3
1 posted 2008-03-02 10:04 PM


wow- you have such away with words, you uncover the beauty that i had never known they had contained.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
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at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-04-10 08:40 PM


good write!

JJ

Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19
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3 posted 2008-04-14 05:50 PM


oh wow... this is wonderful like everything else youve written. love it!
XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland
4 posted 2008-04-14 10:22 PM


Amazing, as always.

   {~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

surf_painter
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5 posted 2008-04-17 08:50 AM


beautiful as always
Earl Robertson
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BC, Canada
6 posted 2008-04-18 07:32 PM


"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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