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Hourglass Time
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Hourglass Time |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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written away in the pages im just another memory im sorry im not the greatest i wont go down in history i wont be remembered i wont be around forever im just not worth that effort im just a nobody maybe you will read this in the future sometime look back and realize that this was all for you in time rest in peace this epitaph read here i lay now cold and dead im drowning in the sea of red and every word that you ever said |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
CO this is amazing!!! I love it! Very deep very awsome! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Love this. You say you can't miss something til its gone.. An amazing talent who has touched my life and that won't ever be forgotten.. There's many more rollercoasters for us to travel maybe together maybe apart. But i will never forget the guy that made me who i am.. The guy i miss with my entire heart.. The guy that makes my heart beat two times faster than its normal speed, that guy is you.. and i'm so proud of who you are and what you will become.. Jess xoxox |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Whoa!! the end gave me chills. *like most of your poems* ~Zach~ |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
I liked the poem it was a ncie read and all but I don't see how the title fits it at all sorry |
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RedNail Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 65Stockholm, Sweden |
Wonderful. You're going into my library.  Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Chilling ARCTIC WIND |
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