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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2008-03-02 03:25 AM

Wow!!!! I have had writers block for sooooo long it seems. Haha so i am like really really rusty!!

I never thought this would happen to me
Falling in love, and falling deep
You melt my heart with everything you do
And I hope you know how much I’m in love with you

You sat and watched “The Swan Princess” with me
‘Cos I once told you it used to be my favourite movie
You took me out to my first ballet
Handed me a beautiful red rose that made my day

I love being with you, lying in your arms
But still I wonder how I fell into your charms
I know that you’re right for me but still I don’t know how
You became my future, you became my now

I never thought I’d fall so hard so fast
I never have before, never in the past
But you drew me in captured my heart
And I miss you so much when we’re apart

I hope we last forever like you say we will
I know I shouldn’t worry but still...

~frustrated writer~
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since 2008-02-25

Posts 84

1 posted 2008-03-02 05:48 AM

wow!.

you must be lucky!!

but i think he's luckier to have you..

**LiRa**

Ri
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since 2008-02-01

Posts 67
Blackburn, England

2 posted 2008-03-02 06:04 AM

aww thats really sweet ^.^
You haven't lost it quite yet, sometimes breaks from writing can help us to gather our thoughts and find a direction

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-03-02 09:58 AM

aww i love happy stories- i just fell into one of these myself . . . i'm so happy for you. it's ag reat feeling- just monitor how you feel- fellings can tip you off- okay?

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

RedNail
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since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

4 posted 2008-03-02 12:42 PM

Aww, so sweet. Love is such a wonderful feeling. *Sigh* ^^

Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride.

ILoveTheRain
Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
GA

5 posted 2008-03-02 03:03 PM

This is really really good.
I wouldn't have been able to tell you had writers block

Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

6 posted 2008-03-03 06:10 AM

your first love is the one that hurts the most and repeats over and over in your head after its gone. sad but true i guess.

amazing write hunnie.

and if this is rusty, i need to take some poetry courses. lol

theiamsadsong
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 17

7 posted 2008-03-03 01:34 PM

AWWWWWW! this poem really captures the fear you feel when in love and things seem too good to be true...good job!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-03-03 05:35 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

tiny_ME
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since 2008-03-01

Posts 26

9 posted 2008-03-15 09:43 AM

,.,.,.simply terrific,..:p

,..though i couldn't relate with you, i'm pretty sure your happy now,.
wish you luck,., "p,.

-christina-

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

10 posted 2008-03-15 09:53 AM

beautiful poem. i like this one and i never would'of knew you had writers block lol

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

starpower
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 82
Utah

11 posted 2008-03-15 03:02 PM

Hunnie_gilr,
that was wonderful poem and I love the way you pust to the words together

You can send me an email,
Thanks

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