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ILoveTheRain
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0 posted 2008-03-02 12:20 PM



She was born during a beautiful morning
Ready to see what life has for her
Never to know that the future
Is waiting to come for her

As she grew up
Wanting to know and see everything
She found out that her family
Wasn’t in the best harmony

All the fighting that happens
All the screams, all too loud
All the tears that stream,
All is not as good as it may seem

Everything happens for a reason,
Is what she heard all her life
Later to find out soon
That her father is now without a wife

Only  six weeks later
He is remarried once again
Third time is the charm
Hopefully this one is better in the end

All the fighting that happens
All the screams, all too loud
All the tears that stream,
All is not as good as it may seem

Her mother is on her own
Trying to find herself
She ends up having a beautiful baby boy
To a man nowhere near wealth

She feels once again alone
No one to turn or talk to
Always afraid to just pick up that phone
Never feeling that she can be rescued

All the fighting that happens
All the screams, all too loud
All the tears that stream,
All is not as good as it may seem

After she gets used to the situation
Her heart begins to heal
She finds out it is better this way
Making it all seem unreal

Now she is happy
All the fighting is now gone
No more worries to tend to
She has been waiting so, so long.

All the love that is shared
All the comfort and sereneness
All cannot be compared
And finally…
All is as wonderful as it may seem


[This message has been edited by ILoveTheRain (03-04-2008 08:28 PM).]

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2008-03-02 12:31 PM


ohhh WOW!!! Welcome to Passions Jessica... I really liked this and I hope i will get tue read more soon!!! hehe hmm another Jessica.. hehe realli popular name around here hehe!!
Krysti

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2 posted 2008-03-02 02:15 AM


Hey Im Falling rain (you can call me Zach) And i thought this pome was amamzing for one of your first posts. I can't wait to see more. and welcome to PIP



Have a great day!!  

RedNail
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since 2008-02-29
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3 posted 2008-03-02 06:46 AM


Welcome to pip. I really like your first poem here and I hope to see more from you soon. ^^,



Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride.

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
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4 posted 2008-03-02 09:53 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!

Exelent first post! Loved it!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
Posts 157
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5 posted 2008-03-03 06:44 AM


I just realized that I messed  up!

"After she gets used to the situation
Her heart begins to heal
She finds out it is better this way
Making it seem unreal

Now she is happy
All the fighting is now gone
No more worries to tend to
She has been waiting so, so long."

Apologies to everyone!!


Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2008-03-03 05:31 PM


Welcome To pip!

ARCTIC WIND

starpower
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 82
Utah
7 posted 2008-03-15 01:19 AM


Wow that was a wonderful poem that you worte and you can send me an email st Starpowe60@hotmail.com

You can send me an email,
Thanks

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
8 posted 2008-03-15 03:41 PM


welcome to pip


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