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Teen Poetry #8

Let me see who you are

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

0 posted 2008-03-01 11:25 PM

confused and wondering'
through an endless blurr
trying to find the sanity
but waht sanity is im not sure
living and learning
past and present fade
anger and furiosity begin to surface
if things continue the way they are
misery and torment will become who i am
open your eyes look deep inside
you arde me let me see who you are
anger anf furios ity misery and torment let me see who you are
let me see who you are

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

RedNail
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

1 posted 2008-03-01 11:30 PM

This is a great poem, but you might wanna check your spelling. ^^

Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-03-02 12:27 PM

ohhh wow Adreanna this is such a beautifull poem!!! i havent read anything from yooh foar soooo long guud tue see yooh back in the blue pages

Krysti

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

3 posted 2008-04-22 09:45 PM

thanks planning on more soon

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