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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-03-01 10:18 PM


Okay Guys Here's Another Sappy Love Poem, That I Really Can't Write.. Please Give Lil Miss Em (Forever Broken) A round of applause as she is the insperation for my last stanza. One Talented Chicky She Is!!

The Sun Sets For Anyone Who's Willing To Sit & Watch (I'm Only Me When I'm With You)
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So maybe I should have seen the signs
Read the writing on the wall
Realized by the distance in your eyes
That I’d be the only one to fall

Sometimes I think we’re working
But then you push me away
If only you could realize
That you tore my heart out today

My Prince Charmin’s out there somewhere
Even I know that’s true
But the truth is I’m only me
When I’m standing next to you

You’ve got your wish
I’ll go without a fight
You don’t want me anymore
So I’m leaving here tonight

[This message has been edited by RevengeIsMine (03-01-2008 11:53 PM).]

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2008-03-01 10:22 PM


awe jessie hun! I told you, you're amazing at this! it's beautiful, as always.

     {~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

RedNail
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since 2008-02-29
Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden
2 posted 2008-03-01 11:27 PM


Wonderful poem! There's just one thing that's confusing me. "That’d". Is this just a typo or is there a flaw in my grammar?


Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride.

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
3 posted 2008-03-01 11:54 PM


Thanks Guys,

Typing error there.. sorry..

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada
4 posted 2008-03-02 12:19 PM


ohh Jess hunn... this was amahzin' one uf my favs def.. butt... yooh always do write my favs
Love yooh
Krysti

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
5 posted 2008-03-02 06:14 PM


Thanks Hunnie.. So Great to have ur comments u make me feel special lol..
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