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once a good friend
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once a good friend |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Though as iron Hard as nail My bestest friend But still crys and wail His emotions pour on my feet His soul is breaking. i dont know how to mend How do you help a broken soul? A broken friend... Im oh so confused and helplessly useless My emotions wirl in one gaint blow How do you help him?? I do not know He's shut me out I'll keep knocking on his door He wont let me in I lie in wait on the floor What if he opens up? Will i be able to cure His broken heart Once filled.. was so pure Now it is dark Black as night I dont reconize him He just wants to argue and fight He is a stranger i do not know Hes not my friend Im so confused But theres no time to help his soul. no time to mend I can see no light, no purity in his heart The only heart ripping now is mine. its apart Your blacken soul Has stained like ink I float in emotions but not any more i just sink.. You've taken control Your sins have you now My tears are falling I cry aloud I wish to save you but your not letting me in but you can't see i use to call you threes words... my good friend ----------------------------------------------- I hope this poem helps my friend relize that he needs professional help... And that im here if he needs any support to fall on to. Hopes this help, ~Zach~ |
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prettypinkrebel Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 104 |
hey i love this it haS great flow and u can feel the emotion. i know exactaly what u mean thanks for a good write and hope things get better for the both of our friends... <3 adreanna leigh |
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RedNail Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 65Stockholm, Sweden |
You sure have a talent, this poem is very sad however. I hope life gets better for both of you. Keep it up. 
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow Zach... this wuz soo sad,, very beautifully written... i hope she gets the help she needs!!! Krysti |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA |
I love this. It makes you think. The best poems to me are the ones that make you think and have a complex story behind them. I am also new to writing, so well done! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Atta Boy Zach, that was good , only 2 comments, use the spell checker & make sure Keagan sees it... you did real good Bro'... John |
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I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
Zach....thank you.... i didnt mean to hurt our friendship...your still a deep friend of mine and u have my total respect... i have problems and i need to fix them. thanks and thank you everyone for supprting zach... he's awesome.. --Keagan p.s. and krysti i'm not a girl. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I know you'd never perposely hurt our freindship. And no problem im just trying to help a great friend...i hope things get better for you, just know that im always here to catch you when you fall.  |
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