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From day to night
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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From day to night Seasons change Hopes set high Only to be smashed down in vain Im in between The dark and light Never sleeping never awake never dreaming Never seeing ---------------------------- okay i dont know what this means. please explain? |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Man This is great! As for what it means... Well I believe it's about the shades of grey. How some things that start as black and white become twisted so you see them as grey. From the vault over here: /pip/Forum101/HTML/001796.html Good Job. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Limbo about sums it up for me Zach, these feelings are all part of growing up & what will make you what you become in the future..We all go through it do not dwell on these issues too long, thay will pass & things can & will come better... John |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
hmm limbo thats sounds pretty much like my poem. and i do not feel like this. i was having trouble sleeping one night cuz words kept swirling about in my mind and i had to type them down lol i didnt know what the whole messege that i wrote down ment. |
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